Reply To: The Grey Wolf flaws
I know the passage you’re speaking of, and I assumed it was a literary choice and not an error. I enjoyed that back and forth narrative; it made me stop and think – “oh, and that’s what came before! and here we are at that same moment again, seamlessly melding together”. That said, I may be totally wrong, and it might indeed have been a mistake. If it was, though, it didn’t bother me, and I thought it worked effectively. There’s a lot of timing elements in this book, with simultaneous actions occurring concerning various characters. As I mentioned in another post, I didn’t think the timing of the break-in at Armand’s apartment was logical compared to the timing of the phone calls he’d been receiving. But I think overall the more chaotic back and forth narrative added to the tension and that suited this story very well.
